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Very atmospheric

At first, I was like....
"a classical song!? I can't be paired up with a classical guy!"
But then I actually listened to the whole song.

The begging was a nice building up.
I also like how those string patterns continue through out the whole song even with the drums in the background, it all sounds nice.
I love the EQ ing and Mastering in this song, it gives it a very atmospheric feel to it, like calming.... but not at the same time lol

but..... this is unfinished :(
There isn't really an ending to the song......
Keep working! You've got about a week or so to finish this up.

Just make an ending and it would be perfect!

9/10
4/5

~Joseph F.

Manhart responds:

Hey man.
Thanks for the review ! :D
The song needs SO many improvements, and I already got them in my head!
My only problem is time... I haven't had time to make more to it yet. But I hope I get the time before the 25'th :P
But thanks again! I will review your song aswell when I have more time (I'm at work right now all night..)

Hi there again.

I know you might not know me but.....
do you remember Naruichigarra?
yup thats me
I have improved soo much :D

anyway, to your song...

Love the piano parts here, beautiful.
Lyrics go great with the song, this is worth money
Who knows, you might even get discovered and go big!
Melodies are great! Sounds overall professional, kinda of reminds me of the song Fireflies by Owl City.
You've improved a lot since the last time I listened to you, and its great!

Hope you do great in the future, also, take a listen to some of my stuff if you have the time!

Also, awesome job on top 5 when it happened.

10!
5!
Fav Artist!

Superb job my friend :D
~Joseph F. (Naruichigarra/dj-jo)

fishfood2021 responds:

Yeah, I'm kind of going for his style without copying him. :P Thanks for reviewing! And you're name seems familiar... hmm..

I wonder...

why these good songs get zero bombed...

This is a good song by the way.

here are some things you should keep in mind though
some parts near the end, its get "busy".
try not to introduced too much harmonies.
it doesn't sound too good when too much things are going on. It can also add dissonance meaning, notes that don't sound good played together.
Drums were really great. Loved the snare drum style break in the song.
Also like the way the bassdrum is used in the beginning.

My Suggestion: Try adding more bass or a louder bassline. I like bass :D

In all, this song doesn't deserve a lousy 2.41
more like a 4.30 or 4.50

This is sounds like it could be a hit.
good luck on EP
Hope you make it!

I gave it a 5
YOU SHOULD TOO!

~Joseph F.

momboom1 responds:

Thanks for the suggestions and review dude!

lmao!

If there is a zero bomber in my songs, I will post this as my response.
This is freaking hilarious!

Stalagmite responds:

haha! thanks man! i would happily meet them face to face to tell them it. MAN they are ass bandits lol :D

Pretty good for a first! * * * * outta 5

Pretty darn good a first techno song!
The beginning was okay, but try a different crash cymbal or use a different drums to pull the beginning together into the chord structure.

When the solo came in, I was like "ARG"...."CHANGE THE LEAD! CHANGE THE LEAD"
okay, maybe the lead wasn't THAT bad but try a saw or a square synth.
(and did you use a keyboard to record the solos?)

The 2nd solo wasn't that bad, but it was better than the 1st one!

The transition between the 2nd solo to the 3rd was good.
The 3rd Solo was interesting but still good, for your first techno song production

4th solo the same

Okay, there needed to be a better break after the 4th solo
Then the bridge (I think)
Very catchy!
I love the use of the Piano

After the bridge solo....
An okay break but,
Please change the snare drum...... Try vengeance-sounds
Its really popular throughout NG

Okay. the ending was okay, the solo was a little.....all over the place.
And end the song with a boom!
The song just ended abruptly.....

In all,
Score: 7/10

Structure 3/4 The ending got me
Drums 1/2 Snare drum...
Synths 1/2 The solo Synth
Solos 2/2 Nice melodies!

Hope this helped!

btriangle responds:

Thank you very much for the review. I wrote this song a long time ago, and it was a new experience for me.

Once i get my new samples soon, i might re-do this song for fun.

LMAO

LMA
I can't I sang this XD

Naruichigarra responds:

LMAO*
I can't believe* I sang this XD

Lots of music i guess lolol

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