wow 133 patterns
The most patterns i've got to in FL studios is just 40
So far, all of the songs i've listened to that were submitted by you are great.
Also, nice idea with the mario insert there (lol nice one)
I also like the little break you got in the begging, nice bassdrum entry.
So, in all, this song has a lot of dept and I just can't stop listening to it.
Love all the ideas put into this and how this isn't just some other dance song on Newgrounds.
5 stars and 10 stars
Very very good.
And also, could ya give any tips on making music? It would help alot if you did.
Keep makin music
Pretty good for a first time.
Pretty good for first time. but
you kinda got the chords wrong at 1:40, Look up chords, thats what I did, lol.
And if your gonna make a remix, try changing it up a bit, like the melody or how it is syncopated.
Also, try Vengeance Club essentials. Its top notch for drums and effects.
And nice idea with the Acid 303 lead, but it kinda sounds too plain at parts.
I see what your trying to do, It needs a bit of effects then it would sound better.
Try soundgoodizer, see if you like it. If you have it......
In all 7/10
Stucture 3/5 Chords wrong at parts, ruins the song. Ending was okay
Synths 1/2 Nice Idea with Acid, but change the guitars if can.
Solos 2/2 you got the melody right!
Drum 1/2 Try adding crashes more often. or try VEC/Vengeance Club Essentials
Okay, please make the synths different!
The begging was just like the actual song but when the guitar came in, it ruined it
Try recording yourself playing the guitar, or, get a better VSTI.
Also, find the official Acapella! I did and made my own remix. This one's okay.
Also, search for VEC, Vengeance House essentials. This will help you very much.
Structure 4/5 Just like the song without the words though........
Synths 1/2 The guitar
Solos 2/2 You got em!
Drums 1/2 get Vengeance
When I read this song description,
The atmosphere in the beginning of the song, and what dj Nate said combined almost made me cry....
I know Nate is back now, and glad he is.
I love the melodies in this song,
I love how you brang back the Piano intro
I love how you made me want to get up and dance
I really think, Nate is one of the best Audio Technicians I have EVER seen here on Newgrounds, and I think he should keep going in his music career!
oh yeah and...
I'm sorry about your loss
Score: 10 as Always
Structure: 4/4 I like how it loops well!
Drums 2/2 speechless
Synths 2/2 PIANO!!!
Solos 2/2 Well, yeah
Pretty good for a first! * * * * outta 5
Pretty darn good a first techno song!
The beginning was okay, but try a different crash cymbal or use a different drums to pull the beginning together into the chord structure.
When the solo came in, I was like "ARG"...."CHANGE THE LEAD! CHANGE THE LEAD"
okay, maybe the lead wasn't THAT bad but try a saw or a square synth.
(and did you use a keyboard to record the solos?)
The 2nd solo wasn't that bad, but it was better than the 1st one!
The transition between the 2nd solo to the 3rd was good.
The 3rd Solo was interesting but still good, for your first techno song production
4th solo the same
Okay, there needed to be a better break after the 4th solo
Then the bridge (I think)
I love the use of the Piano
After the bridge solo....
An okay break but,
Please change the snare drum...... Try vengeance-sounds
Its really popular throughout NG
Okay. the ending was okay, the solo was a little.....all over the place.
And end the song with a boom!
The song just ended abruptly.....
Structure 3/4 The ending got me
Drums 1/2 Snare drum...
Synths 1/2 The solo Synth
Solos 2/2 Nice melodies!
Hope this helped!
Thank you very much for the review. I wrote this song a long time ago, and it was a new experience for me.
Once i get my new samples soon, i might re-do this song for fun.
I can't I sang this XD
I can't believe* I sang this XD
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